Date: 10/13/2002 6:05:00 PM
From Authorid: 56396
Another good read.....MPD
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Date: 10/13/2002 6:10:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Thanks again....:)  |
Date: 10/13/2002 6:19:00 PM
From Authorid: 21435
So sad to witness such. Leave the once vital, wounded and silent. Chilling and all too real, my sister. Wonderful expression, by you. Write on...  |
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Date: 10/13/2002 6:22:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Thank you so much brother Kronk....I just needed to get back to it! To have someone such as yourself continue to read my poetry...well, that just means the world to me:) |
Date: 10/13/2002 6:52:00 PM
From Authorid: 54070
This poem is very powerful, and that is an understatement. It looks as if you poured your heart on this. Very nice! *shing!* *sparkle-sparkle*  |
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Date: 10/13/2002 7:01:00 PM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Thank you Joshua...not my whole heart, but a little part of me..:) trying to get back into the groove...thank you, your replies mean a great daeal..and that is no heblinity!:) |
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Date: 10/13/2002 7:11:00 PM
From Authorid: 54070
How Stella...*cough* Anabel got her Groove Back. :p |
Date: 10/13/2002 8:27:00 PM
From Authorid: 4548
i've missed this imagery, so brutally honest. metaphorically speaking, it is to open a vein and bleed lol.  |
Date: 10/13/2002 8:40:00 PM
From Authorid: 33286
dried out, as if reaching back to the sea, beautiful poem my friend, I have missed your writing so much  |
Date: 10/14/2002 6:02:00 AM
From Authorid: 28944
I feel like you've sketched this map out for me b4, but the map is not the territory... your words gave me an intense sense of place -- is that a starfish I see in that melting, streaming groove, heading down and out towards the sea.... could be! hehe... vunnderbarg poetry ana! btw, do you like my new tag!?  |
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Date: 10/14/2002 8:33:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
lol...Kineti...I have a younger man also..but that is not completely restoring the groove...;) |
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Date: 10/14/2002 8:36:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Thanks Jez, it is...I have felt very lost without writing poetry...hoping that it will help me out a bit getting back into it. Sometimes it is more about accomplishing someting. The littlest thing can bring such a sense of it sometimes.:) |
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Date: 10/14/2002 8:37:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
And I yours, Hack...along with not writing as much comes not reading as much...I couldn't think of something more helpless than that final image... |
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Date: 10/14/2002 8:45:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Your new tag is wonderful....very peaceful..I love the colors. Where have you seen this before? I am curious. Thank you, Astral....it is good to see you commenting on my poetry...as it has been something that I have done without, almost since we met. I am glad to have your tag brightening up the place:) |
Date: 10/31/2002 9:20:00 PM
From Authorid: 39179
well done. indeed.
a light in the land of the fading poet  |
Date: 10/31/2002 10:09:00 PM
From Authorid: 12341
Anabel, I wish I could express feelings and emotion and put them to word like this.  |
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Date: 11/4/2002 10:04:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
thank you Pert...your image is correct...just what I was going for. Thank you for the recognition:) |
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Date: 11/4/2002 10:05:00 AM ( From Author )
From Authorid: 34775
Thank you so much, Shadowghost! What a compliment, and for me to see it today when I am feeling less than myself, you have really brightend things! Many thanks for reading~ |
