A Fear Full Tale ~~~ snapple313 __a funny story for creative writing, I'd really appriciate ur imput

A little while ago, not like all those other stories that take place "A long, long time ago", I happened to find myself sitting on the top of a very tall building. The floor was see-through and I could see clear to the ground, many, many stories below. I stepped away from the edge, catching my breath, and I grabbed my shirt. It was then that I noticed what I was wearing. Certainly I had not dressed myself! I had on these yellow pants, not just any yellow pants, but an ugly yellow that was only interrupted by green polka dots. As for my shirt, it was it was red with ugly brown lines running across it. The stun was capped with a look at my shoes. To say a pair would be incorrect because they were, in reality, two left shoes, two hideous brown left shoes. Then I thrust my hands into my pockets, as not to rip the hideous clothes off, and what should I pull out but mud-caked money. This money was filthy. It was dripping with mud. It was covered in germs and caked with grime. I threw the soiled money to the ground and wiped my hands on the icky yellow pants. I then sat down and began to think. Already I have been caught with four fears! Heights, clashing clothes, two left shoes, and dirty money! Then something else came to mind everything was silent. Not a single noise broke the silence. There were cars passing on the streets many stories below the building, yet they produced no sound. Now I was up to five fears. What was going on? At this I began to get very worried, because I was all alone (six fears!) and began to wish someone would come and find me. This was a huge mistake, because who should appear but Mr. Hiner! He led me into the building and took me to a classroom where he sat me down and began to teach me chemistry! Now I was up to seven fears, what have I done to deserve this? I knew I had to get out of this lesson somehow. Suddenly the door burst open. It looked as if fate finally decided to help me. Three giant tomatoes rolled into the room. They use to frighten me; tomatoes are now a love of mine because they saved me. When the tomatoes reached the center of the room, they started to shake, and I knew that I had better escape now, so I ran out the door and closed it behind me. Just in time, too, for the tomatoes exploded, covering the entire room with ketchup! I was free, or so I thought. True, I was away from that wretched chemistry lesson, but I had entered a hall covered from ceiling to floor with geometric shapes, every single one of them circled in red! This frightened me, perhaps more than it should because I was up to 9 fears now, and I began to run. I ran and ran until I reached a big group of people. I was hoping these people would be able to help me get out, and they did try. However, it was rather odd that every single one of their names began with the letter Q. As I tried to explain to them how useless the letter Q was, they all began to laugh at me! How terrible it all is, two more fears have been added. I got away from them as quickly as possible. Finally I stumbled upon two doors. One was the way out, however the other one led to a room teeming with spiders. I hate spiders, but I had to get myself out of here. So I closed my eyes and turned the knob to door one. I stepped into the room, fully expecting to be bombarded with spiders, when much to my surprise I was outside. I finally thought I would be safe, but again, I was wrong. Lightening started to strike the ground. I dashed and darted, nearly getting hit numerous times, and I prayed that the lightening would stop. I didn't know what else to do, I was up to thirteen fears! So I prayed, I prayed and wished the lighting would stop. I guess whoever "they" are, were right when they warned to be careful what you wish for, because how should the suffering end? Why the earth opens up and swallows me. My fourteenth fear, and my end.

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